have a look at this site please

[jibcl500]

As above, Im doing a site for a chap called Carl, he break the W140 mercedes. I would like some feedback on the layout please.
www.carrera2.co.uk

jib

 

[colechelle]

looks good jib!!!

 

[jibcl500]

thankyou
jib

 

[doversole]

I second that, jib - very swish looking.

Can you do one for W202 when you get time?

DoverSole

 

[jibcl500]

Yes I can.

jib

 

[Jay Gee]

Impressive!!

 

[television]

That looks quality Jib very well done

 

[dragon]

If I strip off my w202 and sell every bits on eBay, I may be able to recoup back £21K I paid for it in 97.

 

[rf065]

Not only good looking, but seems user friendly & intuitive.
Impressive.

Russ

 

[jibcl500]

Thanks all.

jib

 

[jberks]

Layout, font and look absolutely spot on.
To be picky - which is why you've asked I guess, I'm not so sure about the wording on the front page - I think that needs a bit of work, but then it is a first draft. Overall though, looks good

 

[r129co]

I notice you are a senior member Jib so what does that make me ?
Carl

 

[television]

I notice you are a senior member Jib so what does that make me ?
Carl

Do not worry Carl for you will never see the number 1 again,,its a good system, and welcome

 

[Ashley H]

Very nice - I wish I had a W140 and could source parts here!

If you want to be finicky:

"All parts are visually checked once remove, cataloged and stored ready for customers. This web site is a point of contact and there is a spares page which will show parts forsale, the price and the part number."

Might read better as

"All parts are visually checked once removed then catalogued and stored ready for customers. This web site is a point of contact and there is a spares page which will show parts for sale, the price and the part number."

and...

"All parts are available and if there is a part you need but its not shown on the spares page then make contact we can help."

to:

"All parts are available and if there is a part you need but it's not shown on the spares page, then make contact - we can help. "

Good luck!

 

[jibcl500]

Thanks all for the input, Ashley thanks, Carl helloo...

jib